Excellent job on tackling the villanelle, my brain is too lazy to even go there. As you mentioned Jodie Comer, I read this poem as the character she plays in 'Help.'
Thanks Zoe, I started writing long lines and then kept worrying there were too many syllables so I pared it down, less is more as they say, plus I'm a simple girl at heart!! 😂
Excellent job on tackling the villanelle, my brain is too lazy to even go there. As you mentioned Jodie Comer, I read this poem as the character she plays in 'Help.'
This is fab! Villanelle nearly broke me once, so we’ll done getting through.
Well freaking done. I know that place well and it's hard to visit it in this poem, but it's good to see it articulated so well.
Thank you 😊
So profound Lisa and you master the villanelle form incredibly too
Lisa, this is so powerful. And I have been in that place.
Ah you went for it. Hoorah! It’s brilliant, though not as ‘dark’ as you felt I feel.
Yeah, it felt dark last night, but on reflection this morning it wasn't so bad!
Whereas my salacious one feels just as risqué this morning.
😂 I still think you need to share it!!
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Thanks Zoe, I started writing long lines and then kept worrying there were too many syllables so I pared it down, less is more as they say, plus I'm a simple girl at heart!! 😂