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Tamsin 🍂's avatar

I mean you made it extra hard choosing 3 lines - madness I say - but boy did it work! 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

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Lisa Andradez's avatar

Thank you :)

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Ellen Clayton's avatar

Lisa I think this is an incredible accomplishment and a poignant, powerful poem ❤️👏🏻

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Lisa Andradez's avatar

thank you so much :)

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Trudi Nicola's avatar

That’s proper clever! 👏👏

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Treasa's avatar

Amazing how you weave the words in seamlessly. I briefly thought about trying the golden shovel but that's as far as I got!

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Lisa Andradez's avatar

It's the though that counts... 😉 Thank you 😊

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Margaret Ann Silver's avatar

I think you should be proud of this poem. It tells a sad, relatable story--I was completely taken in by this speaker.

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Lisa Andradez's avatar

Thank you 😊

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Mamie White's avatar

Amazing, well done on the poem and well done on using the golden shovel THREE times. You clever stick you.

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Lisa Andradez's avatar

Well I didn’t look at it quite like that, til now… Ha! Thank you :)

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A. Wilder Westgate's avatar

This is amazing, Lisa! I really relate to this poem, too. Beautiful.

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Lisa Andradez's avatar

Thank you so much :)

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